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Mission From SATU part 3: Clowns Can't Draw
Posted by Chuckles
8 August 2004, 8:46 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=chuckles.0808040846443.html

Guardian 2 · Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2004 4:26 pm Post subject:

Great. I love this series. When are you gonna start updating them on HFS?

Conrad Lauf · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 139 Location: Australia

Nice ending! Very Happy

Chuckles · Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 12:11 pm Post subject:

Guardian, I will probably post them up there soon. I was going to do them right along, but I was getting ***ZERO*** views, and I didn't need the depression Smile

I'm glad you like the series. I hope you still like me after the next few Twisted Evil

C.T. Clown

Guardian 2 · Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 12:35 pm Post subject:

Yeah, since the return of comments here at HBO, it seems that many people abandoned HFS. Oh well.

Very unique plot, but I'm kindof confused. Who are the six Spartans that have to die?

Chuckles · Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 1:32 pm Post subject:

They died in the last one, Mission From SATU part 2: Fish in a Barrel.

I was revealing Ackerson's rationalization for it. But he is not the only one in the story who has a reason to kill the Masterchief.

C.T. Clown

Guardian 2 · Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 1:59 pm Post subject:

Oh, okay. I got it now. I've just reread them all, and now it makes sense.

Helljumper · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 298 Location: Pittsburgh

that was good, you captured Ackerson's personality and reasoning pretty well. Keep it up. The chapters could be longer but thats on u and indents work well too. The details are great

ODST

Guardian 2 · Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 2:41 pm Post subject:

I was understanding it because I guess I missed the first one. I started with Part 2 because the first one didn't carry the same name, but I got it figured out.

Chuckles · Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 3:01 pm Post subject:

Yeah, I screwed the name up on Daddy Knows Best. It was the first time I used the series function on here, and I thought . . . well let's just say that I thought wrong.

Thanks Helljumper. My chapters seem to resolve themselves at around 1000 words, automatically. The next one should be longer, but I make no promises.

C.T. Clown

Mastergrunt · Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2004 4:25 pm Post subject:

Awesome story Chuckles, I love how you always end each of your chapters with the reader questioning what's going to happen next.

Covie_Lover · Member Joined: 07 Aug 2004 Posts: 280

Hey it's me every one! I have returned from my 12 day trip to Hawaii, and am now writing the next chaper in my Capture a Prophet series. stay posted!

hunter_that_dances · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 30

very good story. but kill ackerson, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Brigade_of_marines · Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2004 7:59 pm Post subject:

I like the stories, but I never get how i flows it changes to many times. It's like hes doing this then all of a sudden doing that with no Explanation or little. I like the series but after the second Chapter it started getting confusing. In this one I didn't know what happened. In the begining he had blood coming out of his head, but in the end he just ran into Spt. 117. I may be missing the flow so if so could you help clarify?

Thanks Very Much.

Is there any comidians on here. If so, it would be great to have a Misadventures of Ackerson...

Chuckles · Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2004 8:05 pm Post subject:

Well, BOM, nobody has seen Spartan 117 yet in this story. Just read carefully, and you'll see that at the end of the last story an ODST Captain had ordered his snipers to shoot Cujo, the Spartan who was acting as an informant for Ackerson.

Maker sure you start reading the series at the beginning, with Daddy Knows Best. I screwed up the title on that one, so it doesn't look like it is the first in the series. It is. So if you haven't read that, it will all make more sense if you do.

C.T. Clown