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hboff Site Admin
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Elitehunter676 Member
Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 61 Location: In the heat of battle with only four Marines and outnumbered three to one. Piss poor odds for them.
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Still going strong, keep up the good work
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676 Elites hunted
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g money chuck Member

Joined: 19 Oct 2006 Posts: 19 Location: Warrenton Va. No pun intended.
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Dr Sky Tower Member

Joined: 10 Jun 2006 Posts: 120 Location: Auckland, New Zealand
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Another excellently written story!
I like your dialogue between the two characters. It flows smoothly, and I like how you portrayed their emotions. |
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