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Mission From SATU part 2: Fish in a Barrel

 
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 8:30 pm    Post subject: Mission From SATU part 2: Fish in a Barrel Reply with quote

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Mission From SATU part 2: Fish in a Barrel
Posted by Chuckles
1 August 2004, 6:57 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=chuckles.0801040657472.html
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 8:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Daddy Knows Best was the first story in this series, in case anyone is confused. I screwed up the title to the first one, but got this one right. Found one typo. Oh well.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 1:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

DAMN! You got a real good intircate..uh...whats it called...oh, Intrigue. I really want to kill Ackerson now. He's very Cruel...

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 1:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

could have been longer, the end was kinda confusing, but it was good

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 2:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lexicus, the real Lexicus, thought that the last part was confusing too, so I rewrote it to be clearer. I tried, anyway.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 12:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sweeeeeet. I like how you put Helljumper in as the secondary villian at the end.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 08, 2004 10:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Mastergrunt. I just submitted part three.

For those who don't know, part one was Daddy Knows Best. I screwed up my title on that one, so it doesn't look like it is part of the same series. It is. And if you click on "read this series" it will be on there.

Part three should be on the next update.

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