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Mission From SATU part 2: Fish in a Barrel
Posted by Chuckles
1 August 2004, 6:57 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=chuckles.0801040657472.html

Chuckles · Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 8:49 pm Post subject:

Daddy Knows Best was the first story in this series, in case anyone is confused. I screwed up the title to the first one, but got this one right. Found one typo. Oh well.

C.T. Clown

Brigade_of_marines · Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 1:21 am Post subject:

DAMN! You got a real good intircate..uh...whats it called...oh, Intrigue. I really want to kill Ackerson now. He's very Cruel...

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-BoM

Helljumper · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 298 Location: Pittsburgh

could have been longer, the end was kinda confusing, but it was good

ODST

Chuckles · Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 2:42 pm Post subject:

Lexicus, the real Lexicus, thought that the last part was confusing too, so I rewrote it to be clearer. I tried, anyway.

C.T. Clown

Mastergrunt · Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 12:27 am Post subject:

Sweeeeeet. I like how you put Helljumper in as the secondary villian at the end.

Chuckles · Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2004 10:14 am Post subject:

Thanks Mastergrunt. I just submitted part three.

For those who don't know, part one was Daddy Knows Best. I screwed up my title on that one, so it doesn't look like it is part of the same series. It is. And if you click on "read this series" it will be on there.

Part three should be on the next update.

C.T. Clown