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hboff Site Admin
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Mainevent Member
Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 796 Location: Mobel, Abalama
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Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 5:08 pm Post subject: |
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Sorry guys, at one part it says adjourn, and it should be adjacent.
My bad. Too many court movies in Law and Society. |
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HoZ Member
Joined: 29 Jul 2004 Posts: 440 Location: Tyrone, PA (HA I'M POOR)
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Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 5:28 pm Post subject: |
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| wow that was unexpected, FRIGGEN AWASOMEĦ |
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thedarkfire Member

Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 1045 Location: Thousand post land. Oh look! A pidgeon!
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Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 10:48 pm Post subject: |
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Great as always Main. My one gripw was that it should have been longer.
Does this coincide with the official Halo 2 story or is this of your own deseign? |
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Ascendant_Justice Member
Joined: 03 Dec 2004 Posts: 7
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 4:12 am Post subject: |
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A fleet of 34 against 500? lol
It would be ironic if they actually turned the tide of the battle.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Hurry up and write sequels! |
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Mainevent Member
Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 796 Location: Mobel, Abalama
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:08 am Post subject: |
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I apologize guys for the length. I wanted to do more, but I wanted a lot of focus on this event. So I tried to elongate what amounts to a five minute event as long as possible.
I've got rough plans for the rest of the plot, and I think you'll like it.
34 covenant ships are a surprisingly big benefit, considering one covenant ship can usually take out three single human ships.
I'm just waiting for the death grip of MCC.  |
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thedarkfire Member

Joined: 03 Aug 2004 Posts: 1045 Location: Thousand post land. Oh look! A pidgeon!
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:10 am Post subject: |
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O he'll come. As soon as he finds out that there are more fic for him to wipe his butt with.  |
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Mainevent Member
Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 796 Location: Mobel, Abalama
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:15 am Post subject: |
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| Oh, and as to the question to whether or not this was based on the actual storyline, no, it isn't. But it has similarities to keep it at least somewhat within the believable realm. |
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Commander Demitri Wolf Member

Joined: 11 Oct 2004 Posts: 1073 Location: In the tower above the earth
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:16 am Post subject: |
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| Oh, now you've done it. |
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Mainevent Member
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:24 am Post subject: |
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I know!
*hides under covers* |
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Chuckles Member

Joined: 29 Jul 2004 Posts: 1000 Location: Grand Rapids MI
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 8:25 am Post subject: |
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Very, very nice. Limitless plot potential, great detail and expertly written. I didn't see one thing to gripe about, except for the length, but we've been there already.
Awesome job. I'll be looking forward to the next one.
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Commander Demitri Wolf Member

Joined: 11 Oct 2004 Posts: 1073 Location: In the tower above the earth
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 9:17 am Post subject: |
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| great story |
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Helljumper Member
Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 298 Location: Pittsburgh
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Posted: Fri Dec 31, 2004 12:53 am Post subject: |
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that was very good
ODST |
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Mark Lieberg Member

Joined: 12 Nov 2004 Posts: 770 Location: South Korea
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Posted: Fri Dec 31, 2004 1:20 am Post subject: |
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That was good. But was that a Prophet speaking to John? Which one?
Great story. I wish i can see the next one. _________________ Mark Lieberg
#179/1204
"Studying Computer Information Systems (That's Programming for you retards out there)" |
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Mainevent Member
Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 796 Location: Mobel, Abalama
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Posted: Fri Dec 31, 2004 1:36 am Post subject: |
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| Yes, the MC was talking to the Prophet of Brotherhood. |
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