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Guerilla: Could you say that again?
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 4:25 pm    Post subject: Guerilla: Could you say that again? Reply with quote

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Guerilla: Could you say that again?
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28 December 2004, 5:43 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=mainevent.1228040543504.html
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 5:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry guys, at one part it says adjourn, and it should be adjacent.

My bad. Too many court movies in Law and Society.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 5:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow that was unexpected, FRIGGEN AWASOMEĦ
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 10:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great as always Main. My one gripw was that it should have been longer.

Does this coincide with the official Halo 2 story or is this of your own deseign?
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 4:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

A fleet of 34 against 500? lol
It would be ironic if they actually turned the tide of the battle.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Hurry up and write sequels!
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I apologize guys for the length. I wanted to do more, but I wanted a lot of focus on this event. So I tried to elongate what amounts to a five minute event as long as possible.

I've got rough plans for the rest of the plot, and I think you'll like it.

34 covenant ships are a surprisingly big benefit, considering one covenant ship can usually take out three single human ships.

I'm just waiting for the death grip of MCC. Wink
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

O he'll come. As soon as he finds out that there are more fic for him to wipe his butt with. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, and as to the question to whether or not this was based on the actual storyline, no, it isn't. But it has similarities to keep it at least somewhat within the believable realm.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, now you've done it.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I know! Twisted Evil

*hides under covers*
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 8:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very, very nice. Limitless plot potential, great detail and expertly written. I didn't see one thing to gripe about, except for the length, but we've been there already.

Awesome job. I'll be looking forward to the next one.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 9:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

great story
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 31, 2004 12:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

that was very good

ODST
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 31, 2004 1:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was good. But was that a Prophet speaking to John? Which one?

Great story. I wish i can see the next one.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 31, 2004 1:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, the MC was talking to the Prophet of Brotherhood.
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