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Parcel o' Rogues - Part Four - High Sacrilege

 
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 1:53 pm    Post subject: Parcel o' Rogues - Part Four - High Sacrilege Reply with quote

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Parcel o' Rogues - Part Four - High Sacrilege
Posted by Jillybean (jbean_gotmuse@yahoo.co.uk)
22 December 2004, 11:23 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=jillybean.1222042323354.html
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 5:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Holy crap......

That's a very good holy crap Smile
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 7:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've been waiting for this series for a long time.

I just wish the Internet would actually work and let me see the story.

- Dave.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 11:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, I know, I should read both and post on just the latter, but, I do things a certain way.
Besides, I think that people like you should post these one chapter at a time. I can only take so
much goodness in one sitting (plus, then there's none left for next time).

I noticed some small mistakes, but, nothing that made me stop over it.
Also, I am liking how you are adding a more feminine side to the Elites you create. It just makes
things more interesting to read. I suppose it is because I can feel more for a race that has the two
different sexes; relate more.

Overall, there are some very interesting things that you are presenting with your series. But I
welcome them. I'm glad you started posting here again, Jilly. Don't even think about stopping.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 24, 2004 5:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I read it.

Good isn't the word I would choose to describe it. No.

I'd describe it using the words, "Brilliant, Imaginative, Passionate," and the like.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 24, 2004 5:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

All hail! Queen of the Golden Age!

*bows*
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 24, 2004 5:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Seeing ENS lying facedown on a red carpet, Dave Luck reaches down and begins helping ENS to his feet.*

Hey, let's not go overboard. We should organize ourselves more efficiently if we want to create another Golden Age. ENS has a few ideas, I'm sure he's already told you.

I think we should ask Wu to keep his updates at a rough week-and-a-half, or every two weeks. That way, we'd be able to keep up a little better.

For one, Jilly, You're an inspiration to us all.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 24, 2004 9:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, once again Jillybean has cemented herself as the definitive fanfic writer. One or two small mistakes with "is" instead of "it", but other than that it actually has good grammar, and reading it doesn't make me want to cringe. And nice portrayal of Grunts, devillish little buggers!

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 24, 2004 6:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't know Dave. I wouldn't like that. You see, it goes both ways. The more frequently he updats, the less stories we have, and so we are happy... until the next update comes two days later.
I'm good with every five days. Else, you get well above twenty posts per update. And then they get boring and drawing to read. And some people don't get any reviews at all.
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