CaptainRaspberry Member

Joined: 20 Mar 2009 Posts: 56 Location: Littleton, MA
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 11:04 pm Post subject: |
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The rhythm seems off and some of the rhymes are a stretch (or are completely non-existent). Still, though, I like what you're trying here. It almost sounds like a battle poem. _________________ Superstite es non sole;
Salute es dignus.
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