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PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2012 2:59 pm    Post subject: Rolling Thunder! Reply with quote
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Rolling Thunder!
Posted by PoeticRulesAll (randomiser1337@gmail.com)
20 March 2012, 9:12 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=PoeticRulesA0320120912191.html
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 11:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
The rhythm seems off and some of the rhymes are a stretch (or are completely non-existent). Still, though, I like what you're trying here. It almost sounds like a battle poem.
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