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Forgotten Lives - Histories
Posted by CaptainRaspberry (jptaber@gmail.com)
22 September 2011, 4:27 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CaptainRaspb0922111627371.html

kr1 · Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 9:35 pm Post subject:

Quality as usual, Captain. Very interesting how it ties into your previous series, as well. Wasn't expecting that, but I always admire inter-fic continuity. It helps make it seem more like a real world that your a part of instead of just someone else's sandbox you're playing in.

It was WAY too short, however, but I can't complain about that much, not having written anything myself in about a year...

Anyways, nice work.
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MasterPIE · Member Joined: 02 Mar 2011 Posts: 12 Location: Singapore

Always liked how your writing has been short but impactful, and i agree with kr1 on the fact that it has an intricate but nicely woven plot. Character development has been prominent over the story, and i can sense the atmosphere... Great work! looking forward to the next piece.
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CaptainRaspberry · Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 1:47 am Post subject:

I'm glad you're all liking it.

Yes, it could have been longer, but for the sake of pacing this one needed to be short. The next chapter will be longer and move the plot along another full bracket. I hope.

I wish I could say that my attention is being pulled every which way and that's the source of delay on new chapters, but really it's just my laziness.
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