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PostPosted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:17 pm    Post subject: Halo Destitution Reply with quote

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Halo Destitution
Posted by Steve Harlow (Kurtwylde1@hotmail.com)
9 September 2011, 7:54 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Steve_Harlow0909110754141.html
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 4:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I actually was happy with this story. Sure, you had a lot of capitalization errors, but you could fix that with a simple proofread or two. Maybe it's the setting, or something else but I'm really liking this story. Make sure you proofread your story better next time before submiting and double-space between your paragraphs. I'll be waiting for part two.
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