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ODSS Chapter 7
Posted by Firerwolf (triss2008@yahoo.com)
26 August 2011, 2:12 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Firerwolf0826111412081.html

Spartan006 · Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2011 4:18 am Post subject:

Sorry it took me so long to get to this, college classes have started back up. Sad

I had fun reading this one.There was only one part where you seemed to have just jumped midsentence into a new paragraph leaving your sentence unfinished. I like the way you've been developing Kathleen throughout this series, and I'm excited to see how this next chapter turns out. Sorry for the wait, but I'm glad I got to this! Keep it up!
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firerwolf · Member Joined: 03 Jul 2011 Posts: 10

Oh, yeah, classes started up for me as well. I don't think i did a extra, like third, check of this one. I submitted it late at night so a mistake like that was possibly missed.