Spartan006 Member

Joined: 17 Mar 2006 Posts: 366 Location: On the worst internet ever...for real.
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Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 12:22 am Post subject: |
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Nice job Firerwolf, I enjoyed this one. The flashback scene with the Spartans was pretty cool and brought some interesting questions into my head about where the story was going. Some of the Spartan conversations seemed forced, but overall it flowed well. Sorry that it took so long to get around to your story, hopefully I can get to your next one quicker. Keep it up! _________________ Randomly invading your fanfiction since 2006. |
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