HBO Fan Fiction

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Halo: Slayer
Posted by Matt Mills (Matt_Mills)
25 June 2011, 4:42 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Matt_Mills0625111642121.html

kr1 · Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 5:25 am Post subject:

I actually really enjoyed the concept of this. It's something I've always thought of doing myself, and it's neat. I like that it's all very sudden, and that your character doesn't really know what he's doing or why, but just ding it.

There's definitely room for improvement, though. I'd love to see this expanded, with full matches and some more backstory to the character and why he's there. Really, just if it were longer and more in-depth, this would be great.

And Danny, it's a very generic title and makes sense for his story. I wouldn't get too upset about it.
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