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Halo: Revival part 1
Posted by Carson Woo (chinamancarson@yahoo.com.hk)
27 April 2011, 7:26 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Carson_Woo0427111926581.html

Mark Lieberg · Posted: Fri Apr 29, 2011 2:52 pm Post subject:

A little better than the previous ones you have written.

Glad there is only one that you've posted this time.

Short and brief. It was...I don't really know to be truthful.

You should take the time out to go to the writing thread we have here on HBOFF and ask for help/ideas on how to fix GPS. I think that's one of your biggest gimmies right there.

Remember.

Baby steps. Wink

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