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Providence Part One
Posted by MaxRealflugel (flugel_mcdougall@hotmail.co.uk)
20 April 2011, 9:37 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=MaxRealfluge0420112137231.html

CaptainRaspberry · Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 2:47 pm Post subject:

I gotta say, this is a pleasant read. Very good writing, the dialog matches the personality we know about Sangheili without being too ornate (a trap a lot of writers fall prey to), and it's compelling. The touch of Reach was also much appreciated.

It's short, but it sets up the primary conflict well. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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kr1 · Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 6:18 pm Post subject:

I agree with Raspberry completely here. Nice, short fic, with a very well-done presentation of the Sangheili, and from a new angle as well. You give us little tidbits of information here and there, enough to keep me, at least, interested in where you're going with this. The ritual seemed very Sangheili, and I'm very interested in this secret society-type group that performs it, and how the Arbiter ties in. Plus, a well-written story set after Halo 3 is always a plus.

Keep up the good work, and welcome to HBOFF!
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flugelmeister · Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2011 7:02 am Post subject:

Thanks for the comments, they're always appreciated.
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Mark Lieberg · Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2011 12:09 pm Post subject:

This is one of the first Covenant POV stories that I am actually extremely looking foward to in continuing.

I loved it. Absolutely loved it. Keep it up. You've got talent.

Could you give us a date though? But if you never intended to have a date, it's fine by me. I'm just curious.

Great job =)
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kr1 · Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2011 1:52 pm Post subject:

flugelmeister · Posted: Wed Apr 27, 2011 7:13 am Post subject:

As far as I know I've always posted under flugelmeister, though I'm not completely sure if I've tried with MaxRealflugel--my b.net title.

Can't really provide any times. Sorry. And this week and next will be hectic to say the least. But I'll try and get the next part out this week. Can't promise, though.

Again, thanks for the comments.
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flugelmeister · Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2013 11:40 am Post subject:

Never did finish this.
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Mark Lieberg · Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2013 5:34 am Post subject:

This was one story I actually kept my eye on too. And I RARELY do that.

You should post whatever you have since last working on it and call it a rough draft of what was supposed to be Very Happy

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flugelmeister · Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 8:27 am Post subject:

Will do.
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