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Midnight…in the neon night of New Mombasa

 
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 2:13 pm    Post subject: Midnight…in the neon night of New Mombasa Reply with quote

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Midnight…in the neon night of New Mombasa
Posted by Lee Hung Ping (lee.hungping@dhs.sg)
12 April 2011, 1:38 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Lee_Hung_Pin0412111338491.html
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 7:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very good imagery, Lee. ODST is a goldmine for it, and I'm a sucker for it, personally. I'm still not a huge fan of freeform poetry, but your stuff's good nonetheless.
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2011 2:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, this poem was special because i wrote it right after learning that i did not make it into a prestigious writing camp held here in Singapore. (quite pissed actually because 'fall of reach', my first HBOFF was inside the portfolio) However, this stuff's getting old. How many times have I described covenant forces as mindless killing machines? Have to write a poem from their point of view on of these days....
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