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hboff Site Admin
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kr1 IRC Channel Operator

Joined: 27 Feb 2007 Posts: 436 Location: UNSC Frigate September
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 7:06 pm Post subject: |
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Very good imagery, Lee. ODST is a goldmine for it, and I'm a sucker for it, personally. I'm still not a huge fan of freeform poetry, but your stuff's good nonetheless. _________________
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Joined: 02 Mar 2011 Posts: 12 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Wed Apr 27, 2011 2:58 pm Post subject: |
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Well, this poem was special because i wrote it right after learning that i did not make it into a prestigious writing camp held here in Singapore. (quite pissed actually because 'fall of reach', my first HBOFF was inside the portfolio) However, this stuff's getting old. How many times have I described covenant forces as mindless killing machines? Have to write a poem from their point of view on of these days.... _________________ Yes, i haz da recon.
FYI: I am the 'Lee Hung Ping' you see in fanfict posts. I am sorry to keep confusing you all who dont know me. It just gets irritating after a while of starting my posts with 'HungPing here,'. |
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