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Halo: Second War part 1

 
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 2:10 pm    Post subject: Halo: Second War part 1 Reply with quote
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Halo: Second War part 1
Posted by Carson Woo (chinamancarson@ yahoo.com.hk)
1 April 2011, 4:08 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Carson_Woo0401111608061.html
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 3:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I just wasn't feeling this one.

The dialogue, the descriptions.

Cortana.

What were you trying to go for here?
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