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Zanzibar-The Escape: Chapter 16
Posted by 343 Salty Beans (hockyfreak5@yahoo.com)
30 July 2004, 8:19 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=343_salty_be.07300420191415.html

Elitehunter676 · Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 6:37 pm Post subject:

So have you started writing that halo novel yet. I'm anxious to read it, oh and about your story.(Jaw drops to floor) VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRY GOOD!

White elite · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 26 Location: CA.SD

a Sparten died ,wat a differnt plot then i though it would end ..and great story

Shaolin Fist · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 27

damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. that was a goooooooooooood chapter. Grace is gone... Crying or Very sad

but that's the way a Spartan should go out: end it with a bang.

Sentinel · Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 7:44 pm Post subject:

Yeah. Great job man.

SYSTEM · Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 10:10 pm Post subject:

Yo' Beans!

You so real, I felt my spine crack when John smacked me with the SMG.

You so real, I felt Linda put a hole in my chest with a rifle.

You so real, I felt the stress as the countdown began.

You so real, I felt like I was blacking out - Except it was my chair falling over.

Beans, this is the height of your works!

- Dave.
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"When in doubt, empty your magazine." - Murphy's first law of combat operations.

Chuckles · Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 10:43 pm Post subject:

Great job SB. It seems that I read this before. Did you post this on HFS?

C.T. Clown

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

Very good. This was a good piece of work. But I have already said this, back at the HFS.
I'll stick with what I said there.
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Sentinel · Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2004 2:32 pm Post subject:

Real good SB.

Sentinel · Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 1:22 am Post subject:

Wait. I thought I only commented once on this.

Elitehunter676 · Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 9:52 pm Post subject:

I think I'm just going to start calling you Eric, because I'm sure that your Eric Nylund. Your just writing under an alias.

-"Have you ever seen an empty casket son?"
-"Sir yes sir."
-"Good, remeber that sight, because you won't see one here."

Phoenix99 · Member Joined: 04 Aug 2004 Posts: 1

Fan-Frickin-Tastic. Loved the series.

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

I feel the need to write a seconds comment. 343SB, its fantastic that your getting such good reviews. That means that you are doing several things right. But I warn you, don't let it go to your head. If you start dancing around every time someone says your story rocks, its ok, just don't let your head get too big. Knowing you, you probably already know what happens to people who gloat and stuff, they become Jack Asses. Big ones too. Now 343SB, please don't take this in the wrong way. You already know what I'm saying. Just a short little warning, even good writers can revert back to n00bness. (Its just like the darkside, resist the temtations, stay true to the light of HBO and Halo!)

By the way, I'm not a super enthusiastic person. And I hold all FF up to a higher standard. Is this as good as the books? Well, no offense, but no. It good, its very good. But it takes a lot of practice to work up to Halo novel quality. But your getting there.
I'll end with this: If you keep working, and keep dishin' out the goodness, you just might be the next Eric Nylund-ish writer.
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SYSTEM · Posted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 1:19 am Post subject:

Oooh....

Tin Can Man · Member Joined: 15 Jul 2005 Posts: 170

I decided to look back, and hell am I glad I did. Really excellent.