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Zanzibar-The Escape: Chapter 16
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 5:44 pm    Post subject: Zanzibar-The Escape: Chapter 16 Reply with quote

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Zanzibar-The Escape: Chapter 16
Posted by 343 Salty Beans (hockyfreak5@yahoo.com)
30 July 2004, 8:19 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=343_salty_be.07300420191415.html
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Location: In the heat of battle with only four Marines and outnumbered three to one. Piss poor odds for them.

PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 6:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

So have you started writing that halo novel yet. I'm anxious to read it, oh and about your story.(Jaw drops to floor) VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRY GOOD!
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 6:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

a Sparten died ,wat a differnt plot then i though it would end ..and great story
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 6:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. that was a goooooooooooood chapter. Grace is gone... Crying or Very sad but that's the way a Spartan should go out: end it with a bang.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 7:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah. Great job man.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 10:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yo' Beans!

You so real, I felt my spine crack when John smacked me with the SMG.

You so real, I felt Linda put a hole in my chest with a rifle.

You so real, I felt the stress as the countdown began.

You so real, I felt like I was blacking out - Except it was my chair falling over.


Beans, this is the height of your works!

- Dave.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 10:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great job SB. It seems that I read this before. Did you post this on HFS?

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2004 2:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very good. This was a good piece of work. But I have already said this, back at the HFS.
I'll stick with what I said there.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2004 2:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Real good SB.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 1:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wait. I thought I only commented once on this.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 9:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think I'm just going to start calling you Eric, because I'm sure that your Eric Nylund. Your just writing under an alias.



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PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2004 4:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fan-Frickin-Tastic. Loved the series.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2004 5:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I feel the need to write a seconds comment. 343SB, its fantastic that your getting such good reviews. That means that you are doing several things right. But I warn you, don't let it go to your head. If you start dancing around every time someone says your story rocks, its ok, just don't let your head get too big. Knowing you, you probably already know what happens to people who gloat and stuff, they become Jack Asses. Big ones too. Now 343SB, please don't take this in the wrong way. You already know what I'm saying. Just a short little warning, even good writers can revert back to n00bness. (Its just like the darkside, resist the temtations, stay true to the light of HBO and Halo!)

By the way, I'm not a super enthusiastic person. And I hold all FF up to a higher standard. Is this as good as the books? Well, no offense, but no. It good, its very good. But it takes a lot of practice to work up to Halo novel quality. But your getting there.
I'll end with this: If you keep working, and keep dishin' out the goodness, you just might be the next Eric Nylund-ish writer.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2004 1:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oooh....

MC's Cousin wrote:
.....It's like the darkside....


Yea, more like:

Yoda wrote:
....Once started down the dark path, forever will it dominate your destiny!


Well, good or too good, it's still good. Ooh... that gave me a head rush!

Still, I love your writing, Beans! Really!

What are you doing here?! You should be out, publishing your works!

Just think! Your name would be in lights - at the bookstore!

[In Lights] 343 Salty Beans releases hit novel! J.K Rowling put to shame by prodigy's writing talent![/In lights]

- Dave.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 07, 2005 7:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I decided to look back, and hell am I glad I did. Really excellent.
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