HBO Fan Fiction

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Posted by CaptainRaspberry (jptaber@gmail.com)
16 February 2011, 10:53 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CaptainRaspb0216112253381.html

kr1 · Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:07 am Post subject:

Very nice work, Raspberry. It's a pretty original premise, and you do a good job reconciling Reach and TFoR here. You basically reconcile any possible inconsistencies and answer an hanging questions about Cortana's fragment here. I especially liked the fragment choosing Six as her own favorite Spartan, and the idea that all she could give the real Cortana was some kind of intuition regarding the Forerunners. Very nifty.
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