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PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:19 pm    Post subject: Anthem of the Angels Reply with quote

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Anthem of the Angels
Posted by AssaultGodzilla (gojiraspartan117@yahoo.com)
22 July 2010, 6:52 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=AssaultGodzi0722100652211.html
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 6:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Sing to the tune of Umbrella by Rihanna for best results)
You claim to base this thing
On Breaking Benjamin,
But it's plain to see
This ain't done ably

Aside from purposelessness,
No flow, and formlessness,
Free verse is no excuse
For what you've failed to do

Chorus:
Because
When poetry's in its prime
You concentrate on rhythm over rhyme
This was explained in your English class
Perhaps you had your head stuffed up your arse?

It's not the worst poem ever
But nor is it one I will remember
So, in future, please endeavour
Ensure your poems fit a meter
Meter, meter
Eh! Eh! Eh!
(refrain)
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