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Vestal Flame: Chapter One: A Long Stay

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 1:52 pm    Post subject: Vestal Flame: Chapter One: A Long Stay Reply with quote

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Vestal Flame: Chapter One: A Long Stay
Posted by Arthur Wellesley (arthur_wellesly@hotmail.com)
25 June 2010, 4:22 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Arthur_Welle0625100422051.html
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 9:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was one hell of a read. Awesome stuff.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 1:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

As you may have noticed, I don't read much fan fiction anymore, or write for that matter...

But this series you've created kept me interested and was a damn good read on its first run, and to find out that there is more to it was even more pleasant surprise.

Anywho, excellent chapter from an excellent author. Ten outta ten in my book.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 11:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wonderful writing. Nice descriptions without being over-the-top about it. Characters are believable and likeable. Though, isn't 'towards' supposed to be 'toward'? Just a thought.
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks a lot, guys. I really appreciate the comments.

Harbringer, toward/towards, as far as I know, is an either or kind of thing. Towards is more commonly used up here in Canada, which is funny, considering I use predominantly American English. I should probably be consistent.

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