HBO Fan Fiction

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Vestal Flame: Chapter One: A Long Stay
Posted by Arthur Wellesley (arthur_wellesly@hotmail.com)
25 June 2010, 4:22 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Arthur_Welle0625100422051.html

SeverianofUrth · Posted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 9:37 pm Post subject:

That was one hell of a read. Awesome stuff.

Jin1 · Member Joined: 07 Oct 2004 Posts: 24 Location: Florida

As you may have noticed, I don't read much fan fiction anymore, or write for that matter...

But this series you've created kept me interested and was a damn good read on its first run, and to find out that there is more to it was even more pleasant surprise.

Anywho, excellent chapter from an excellent author. Ten outta ten in my book.
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Harbringer352 · Member Joined: 04 Jan 2010 Posts: 52

Wonderful writing. Nice descriptions without being over-the-top about it. Characters are believable and likeable. Though, isn't 'towards' supposed to be 'toward'? Just a thought.

Arthur Wellesley · Member Joined: 30 Jun 2006 Posts: 306 Location: Canada

Thanks a lot, guys. I really appreciate the comments.

Harbringer, toward/towards, as far as I know, is an either or kind of thing. Towards is more commonly used up here in Canada, which is funny, considering I use predominantly American English. I should probably be consistent.

- Arthur
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