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Scrambler (Part 1 of 2)

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:49 pm    Post subject: Scrambler (Part 1 of 2) Reply with quote

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Scrambler (Part 1 of 2)
Posted by The Meep (cbrooks@rivier.edu)
4 June 2010, 2:22 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=The_Meep0604100222181.html
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 4:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is really good. It's written very well; engaging and it keeps my attention. Very smooth narration.

Also, great, original idea. About time some credit is given to the ATV's of the Haloverse.
Short and sweet. Great job.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 6:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I liked this. Shurm's right, it's definitely something new for Halo fics. You came up with a compelling reason for the Mongooses (Mongeese?) and I like the backstory you've got. Prose is easy on the eyes, and no GPS problems. Looking forward to next weeks!

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh wow, comments on one of my pieces!!! I was beginning to lose hope. Razz

I was going to post my inspiration in the comments, but you beat me to it. Heh. Glad you think the idea's original, though; I've noticed that a lot of Halo fiction skimps on the vehicular combat. I originally envisioned this as a... Well, I guess I can't say until Part 2 is done and finished.
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