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What Once was Ours, chapter 8
Posted by Jake Trommer (wedgefan@comcast.net)
28 May 2010, 2:16 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Jake_Trommer0528100216471.html

[Col. Knadan]

I must say, you are making things very interesting.
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I'll tear out skull and beat you to death with it!

"This doesn't seem physically possible!", Micky, RedvsBlue The Blood Gulch Chronicles

[Harbringer352]

Ooh, that's playing dirty, Stacker. Great chapter, Trommer!

[kr1]

I'm sorry I never got back to you on editing for this, Jake. To be fair, the edits I'd have suggested were inconsequential and this still turned out great. I think we could've stood to see the Chief go all out a bit longer, but that's my only real complaint.


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[Wisky-08]

Question what about Admiral Cole and the Everest?

He's alive out there.

Some where.

And with him Hood can stand a better chance out here.

Than there's Spirit of Fire.

By the way really excellent job with the story.

As we say.

For the Resistance!


I must say I'm sadden at witch side the Chief took.

I thought at first he was a double agent, working with Cortana for Hood. And even Still do, even to now.

As maybe this is all part of Hood's plan to expose who, was on their side for real. And to gather information on ONI.

But I was wrong.

Or maybe not.

The Chief is not a soldier who just follows orders blindly. If he did, he would have died along time ago. Its just the Chief part is the only thing in this story that does not feel right?

He's a man.

A good man.

Who has two eye's.

And a brain.

And knows where his loyalties lye.

He knows for a fact that what ONI is doing is wrong.

And as he learn from Halsey, your fate is what you make of it.

I do not support your actions on this little part.

But I will understand, what ever you decided.

But you and I both know who he really is, and as a soldier he will do the right thing.