HBO Fan Fiction

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Posted by Wolf
8 May 2010, 2:37 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Wolf0508100237071.html

Commander Demitri Wolf · Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 1:40 pm Post subject:

No one?

Harbringer352 · Member Joined: 04 Jan 2010 Posts: 52

Sorry.

I liked this. It had a full, satisfactory feeling to it. Plus the language was good, and I didn't spot any GPS errors. So good job. Very Happy

(ENS) Rabid_Gallagher · Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 5:11 pm Post subject:

WOLF! It's great to see you writing again!

What Harbinger said was what I think was a good review of this story. It had a great flow to it, and the pace was quick enough to keep my mind interested in it. You kept the wordiness down and kept it mostly simple, and I like that a lot.

Great job. Very Happy

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Harbringer352 · Member Joined: 04 Jan 2010 Posts: 52

Oh, and nice to meet you, Wolf.

Commander Demitri Wolf · Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 1:27 pm Post subject:

Thanks for the kind words. Harbinger, same to you Smile

. This is planned to be a series, but, given my track record, who knows if it will ever see a second instalment, let alone a conclusion. Watch this space.