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PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2010 2:55 pm    Post subject: Time I Reply with quote

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8 May 2010, 2:37 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Wolf0508100237071.html
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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 1:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No one?
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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 4:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry.

I liked this. It had a full, satisfactory feeling to it. Plus the language was good, and I didn't spot any GPS errors. So good job. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 5:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOLF! It's great to see you writing again!

What Harbinger said was what I think was a good review of this story. It had a great flow to it, and the pace was quick enough to keep my mind interested in it. You kept the wordiness down and kept it mostly simple, and I like that a lot.

Great job. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 5:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, and nice to meet you, Wolf.
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PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2010 1:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the kind words. Harbinger, same to you Smile . This is planned to be a series, but, given my track record, who knows if it will ever see a second instalment, let alone a conclusion. Watch this space.
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