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What Once was Ours, chapter 7

 
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PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 11:27 am    Post subject: What Once was Ours, chapter 7 Reply with quote

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What Once was Ours, chapter 7
Posted by Jake Trommer (wedgefan@comcast.net)
6 May 2010, 7:55 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Jake_Trommer0506101955161.html
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PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 12:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting, I'm curious to see how long Grath can stay hidden but I guess we'll see.
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PostPosted: Thu May 13, 2010 12:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not much to say here I haven't already told you in IRC. I like where this is going. WOWO so far hasn't been headed in a clear direction, but this is getting everything together under one roof. Everything's pretty solid, except the scene with the Buckets on Sigma Octanus. It felt tacked on, and the dialogue was really...not your most inspired. Other than that, though, you managed a pretty good chapter overall, with a decent amount going on but not too much. Looking forward to how the next plays out. Wink
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PostPosted: Thu May 13, 2010 2:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like this story. Not much to say on this one -- writing's solid, dialogue's solid, politics are really solid. A great chapter. Kudos.
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