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Titans of Warfare- Part 2
Posted by spartan shot (farfrompuken191@cs.com)
6 April 2010, 11:50 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=spartan_shot0406102350491.html

Harbringer352 · Member Joined: 04 Jan 2010 Posts: 52

A few misspelled words, commas missing and run on sentences. The plot seems very "He did this; then he did this; so she did this". Overall, I'm interested to see where this is going... John Forge is my favorite character. Very Happy

eb4642 · Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:29 pm Post subject:

I have done a thorough review of this story in this week's Fic Pick.
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