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Soldier Girl Part 14: Time to Go

 
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:12 pm    Post subject: Soldier Girl Part 14: Time to Go Reply with quote

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Soldier Girl Part 14: Time to Go
Posted by Adam Stark (Xvash2@gmail.com)
12 February 2010, 4:02 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Adam_Stark0212100402121.html
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Another solid chapter, with some really excellently written action. The firefight was particularly gripping in this one. There were a few typos/missed commas here and there, but nothing that really detracted.
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