Shurmanator Member

Joined: 14 Aug 2009 Posts: 51 Location: Not Where I Should Be
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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:55 am Post subject: |
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Very, very nice.
Its moody, descriptive, and it sets up a very intersting plot. I liked the allusions to political motivations. It's engaging and easy to understand.
Lots of potential in this, really well done. _________________ Modern Machiavelli. |
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