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PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 3:28 pm    Post subject: A Little Bit of Green Reply with quote

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A Little Bit of Green
Posted by Kaiyo no Hime (hitokiri_hime@yahoo.com)
12 January 2010, 11:05 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Kaiyo_no_Him0112102305111.html
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I read your story on the fan fiction.net and I found it pleasingly dark and depressing, quite similar to Issac Asimov's I, Robot story. I got that tinge of shame at the end, for being human in general. Ach, curse us humanity for disposing of what we don't understand!
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 6:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually, Asimov's I, Robot was a collection of short stories spanning many, many years, not just a single individual narrative. They could be compared, storytelling wise, to Bradbury's Martian Chronicles in how they tell the overall narrative through short stories strung together via a similar theme.

Curse not humanity for what they cannot understand, but pray for understanding, so we may go forth in the search of knowledge without ignorant hindrance.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 4:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Amen to that.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 5:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kaiyo No Hime wrote:
Curse not humanity for what they cannot understand, but pray for understanding, so we may go forth in the search of knowledge without ignorant hindrance.


Or, y'know... just don't be ignorant, and join the pedant's revolt. Smile

Anyway, I like this: you've done well to make this... how can I describe it... fable-like. There are no "characters" as such, but it's still a strong story. Grammar and spelling are impeccable as always, and I really can't see anything wrong with it.

Good work!
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

eb4642 wrote:

Anyway, I like this: you've done well to make this... how can I describe it... fable-like. There are no "characters" as such, but it's still a strong story. Grammar and spelling are impeccable as always, and I really can't see anything wrong with it.

Good work!


As always, thank you, thank you all. Your reviews are most appreciated.
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