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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:00 pm    Post subject: Merry Krustithamusisas Reply with quote

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Posted by Shurmanator (dyshurman@gmail.com)
28 December 2009, 5:06 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Shurmanator1228090506031.html
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 5:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Meant to submit this last week, forgot. Missed the whole "Holiday Fan-Fic Rush". Pity its not "seasonal" any more, but what you gonna do?
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 6:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uh

Well, the story is good

uh

It definitely kept me interested

uh

I liked it. Good job. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

HA HA HA! The right story! FINALLY!

Anyways, loved the story, sure you already read that...heh heh...
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK not gonna lie, that was pretty fucking funny. Good job.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Haha.

That was great. Only improvement I could have thought of was maybe adding a bit more interaction between James and Nramut to give us a bit of insight into James' duties before the encounter with Laura.

Which was a nice touch.

Merry belated Christmas!

Happy fan fic pick of the week!

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 7:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

fallschirmjager wrote:
Haha.

That was great. Only improvement I could have thought of was maybe adding a bit more interaction between James and Nramut to give us a bit of insight into James' duties before the encounter with Laura.

Which was a nice touch.

Merry belated Christmas!

Happy fan fic pick of the week!

Which is you.

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Wow... really? Thanks! Wasn't expecting that! Smile

And when I first started writing it I envisioned it more of an interaction between James and Nramut, but I figured that I had enough of Human-Sangheili comedy with Babylon High, so it ended up that the set up between the two characters didn't lead anywhere.
I really wasn't going for backstory or plot so much, I just wanted to get right to the comedy.
I may extend the story into a series though, I'm debating it.
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