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A Very Merry HBOmass - Part One
Posted by Jillybean (jbean_gotmuse@yahoo.co.uk)
11 December 2004, 10:34 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=jillybean.1211042234591.html

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

Well, since this is indeed a lovely comedy, I won't point out the mistakes I found. I'll just say proofread a couple more times.

That was pretty funny. Not funny as in I was laughing my ass into the floor, but I found it ammusing.
But, you know, not to be pushy or anything...but...nevermind.

I like how you used all those personalities. While I do not know all of them as well as I would like. Some I do not know at all. But, who the hell cares? It was good.
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Jamirus99 · Member Joined: 24 Oct 2004 Posts: 6

Pretty good...too many mentions though. I know everybody you mentioned, but are the cameos really necassary? Not to be harsh...I'm still waiting for my own. Confused

Berconius · Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 2:27 am Post subject:

Wow, that was one heck of a plant.

I don't know all the people in question and I most certainly don't know enough about the Halo community to get all the jokes, but this was still quite fun. Good job.

Thankee for including me!

Slimby · Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 8:33 pm Post subject:

I still haven't found out if I was one of the three unwise noobs in the last years fanfic. And I'm still having to go into hospital to get rid of them damn bits of ice! I'm expecting you to pay for the Jillybean.... Other than the sharp, stabbing pain in my side, it ws funny. I just knew LBM would give Louis Wu a deadly plant... Probably something with the eyes, shifty little things.

Slimby

Sterfrye36 · Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 12:26 am Post subject:

Nice job, Jilly. I like the "Little Shop of Horrors" take off.

"Little Shop, Little Shop of Horrors! Little Shop, Little Shop of Horrors!"...

It's a little bit hard to tell what's going on at times, but still cool.
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Wado · The Hammer Joined: 26 Jul 2004 Posts: 320

To be continued, what you writing for Bungie now? Screen play of Halo 2 is it.

Err... nevermind. Anyway Jilly good to see you posting stories, you always add something around here. Now before anyone else tells you, make sure you spell mnemesis' name correctly with all lower case. Just trust me on this one. ' Wink

HoZ · Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 8:21 am Post subject:

MORE parcel o rougs NOW!