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(ENS) Rabid_Gallagher
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Loved it.
Gasped pretty loud and laughed at the last line too; Definitely didn't expect that. 
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kr1
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Haha, that was a last-minute addition. Never mind Johnson was raised Baptist. 
This is a shorter version, too. I had a bit more of an ambitious idea going, and might go back and write the full version eventually. Maybe for next Christmas. 
Anyways, glad you liked it!
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My thoughts:
Awwwwww.
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Awesome work, kr, loved the punchline at the end, too.
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A good, lighthearted tale. Enjoyed every minute of it.
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That was the best Christmas song I've ever heard.
Great job; loved it, and I laughed out loud at the end. Short and sweet.
And Sergeant Johnson can be all religions... when he needs to be.
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| Loved all of it aside from Stacker 'doing the Lord's work'; I had a higher opinion of him. |
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kr1
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| Commander Demitri Wolf wrote: | | Loved all of it aside from Stacker 'doing the Lord's work'; I had a higher opinion of him. |
I debated that, but he's a walking stereotype anyways, so I figured I'd go all-out. I'd imagined he was half-joking anyways. Still, glad you liked it!
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Well, I can't say I laughed out loud I can say I got quite a few chuckles out of it, plus, that was quite the twist at the end. Good work and Happy New Year.
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