Harbringer352 Member

Joined: 04 Jan 2010 Posts: 52
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:22 am Post subject: |
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Hate to post a reply on my OWN story, but for anyone (if anyone) reads this, this is my first story I've ever actually, um, submitted.
*looks sheepish*
But I would REALLY appreciate feedback. I need to know what I did wrong, how I could improve, the whole steaming, spicy, enchilada.
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