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Fantastic, if any fan-fic deserved the adjetive beautiful, it was that one.
The exchange between the two of them was really touching, you can pick up on the forced light-heartedness going on between the two of them. And his remincisng at the end was a perfect conclusion.
Solemn holiday piece, great job.
*I really have to start putting my name into more of my fan-fics too... 
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Wow, thank you. I didn't think it come off as well as it did. Thanks, Shurm!
And yeah, there's a long story for the reason why I use him in a lot of my fics.
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I agree. Beautiful story. Very obscure where it actually takes place, and when (besides the obvious, folks) but it's supposed to.
Yeah, it is beautiful. Pricelessly unique. 
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| Harbringer352 wrote: | Classic story. This is what happens when you diss a Sangheili. THIS is what happens when you underestimate a woman:
| Quote: | | If you ever attempt to 'flirt' with me again, I will ram this blade so far up your ass that you will be biting down on the hilt when you chew your Pop-Tarts in the morning. |
Classic.  |
As much as I appreciate the comment, I am afraid that you have posted it on the wrong story.
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Thanks, Shurm. I was rereading some of my posts, and when I realized I did the wrong one, eh, I kind of blushed a tomato jealous. I'm still blushing.
Real awkward...kind of hoped no one noticed *looks back and forth conspiracy-like* but, live and let die, yeah?  |
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| Harbringer352 wrote: | Thanks, Shurm. I was rereading some of my posts, and when I realized I did the wrong one, eh, I kind of blushed a tomato jealous. I'm still blushing.
Real awkward...kind of hoped no one noticed *looks back and forth conspiracy-like* but, live and let die, yeah? |
Don't worry about it, like I said, I appreciate the praise, no matter how out-of place it is.
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Hey, I got another comment. 
Thank you! Yeah, the setting is supposed to be relatively obscure. The focus should be primarily on the characters, IMO. But it's post Halo 3.
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