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A Series of Poems: Lark!

 
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 1:08 am    Post subject: A Series of Poems: Lark! Reply with quote

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A Series of Poems: Lark!
Posted by (ENS) Rabid_Gallagher (rabid_masterchief@hotmail.com)
11 December 2004, 8:13 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=ens_rabid_ga.1211042013104.html
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 4:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

--I don't see what this had to do with Halo, you forgot to capitalize Earth, but you get a 75/100. Would have been better if it had a naked Jackal and the 'Alpha male' Hunter right behind it.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 5:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, I think in your pursuit of well used poetic terms and phrases you kinda lost a large reference to Halo.

It was good, but it was off, too.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 10:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow... this was good. But you did forget to mention Halo in there. But it is good. You could enter a poetry contest with that. Seriously.

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What? No presents? Burn in Purgatory!
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 7:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah....I did forget about that....eh, what is a Halo anyways?
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 10:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

--The Halo is a super weapon made to kill all sentient life in the galaxy. A Halo is a golden ring above an angels head.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 2:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You didn't know what a Halo was? I'm assuming that the Halo you were refering that you didn't know what it was was the angel's Halo, not the Halo's Halo (god I've confused myself here) I liked it good job
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 4:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It was a joke...
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 6:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

sorry, didn't pick that up.
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