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PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:41 pm    Post subject: Veracity: Void Reply with quote

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19 October 2009, 10:04 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Shurmanator1019092204241.html
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 8:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Don't stop writing. Please.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Don't worry, I really don't have any intention to stop writing...
Unlike my last series, I actually want to finish this one well enough so I don't get nauseous when i think about it and feel proud of my work. Smile
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 10:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fucking hell, Shurm... this is creepy. I mean, at Chuckles levels of creepiness.

I'm ashamed to say I hadn't read this series properly before this week, and I did notice a couple of GPS errors (mostly with apostrophes) in your earlier chapters... but this is offset by the superb skin-crawling nature of this piece.

Excellent work. You truly are a talented writer, and I'm looking forward to your next submission. Smile
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 11:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks a lot for the feedback!
And I know I have a real problem with GPS errors, I do have to work on my proofreading skills.

Thanks again for all the praise and constructive criticism, it really means a lot. (Huge Ego Talking)
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