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PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:19 pm    Post subject: Veracity: The Beginning Reply with quote

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Veracity: The Beginning
Posted by Shurmanator (dyshurman@gmail.com)
8 October 2009, 12:14 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Shurmanator1008090014161.html
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have no idea why this didn't get compliments.

It's very good. I mean, very. I actually was kind of fearful throughout the entire fic. That's never really happened before. You drew me in, and didn't let go. I love the dialogue, and I love the characters.

Please, keep writing.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 7:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow...Shurm, this was great. And scary as hell. Probably not a good idea to read this right after Death Troopers...I hope I can sleep tonight. Razz
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 17, 2009 2:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback!
And I'm not doing this to be cruel, but I did hope to scare some people who read this. Glad to see I freaked someone out, yay.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shocked

Scary! Nice job Shurm, this was pretty awesome.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 1:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So, took me a while to get to this, sorry. Pretty solid work, although I'm not a fan of horror personally so I can't comment much. It's good to see you can diversify your style, though, and good you're staying around. Keep it up!
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