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Veracity: The Beginning
Posted by Shurmanator (dyshurman@gmail.com)
8 October 2009, 12:14 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Shurmanator1008090014161.html

(ENS) Rabid_Gallagher · Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:48 am Post subject:

I have no idea why this didn't get compliments.

It's very good. I mean, very. I actually was kind of fearful throughout the entire fic. That's never really happened before. You drew me in, and didn't let go. I love the dialogue, and I love the characters.

Please, keep writing.
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Jake Trommer · Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 7:27 pm Post subject:

Wow...Shurm, this was great. And scary as hell. Probably not a good idea to read this right after Death Troopers...I hope I can sleep tonight. Razz

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Shurmanator · Member Joined: 14 Aug 2009 Posts: 15 Location: Downside Up

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback!
And I'm not doing this to be cruel, but I did hope to scare some people who read this. Glad to see I freaked someone out, yay.
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Wolverfrog · Member Joined: 19 Jun 2009 Posts: 8

Scary! Nice job Shurm, this was pretty awesome.

kr-1426 · Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 1:34 am Post subject:

So, took me a while to get to this, sorry. Pretty solid work, although I'm not a fan of horror personally so I can't comment much. It's good to see you can diversify your style, though, and good you're staying around. Keep it up!
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