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PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:19 pm    Post subject: Jurisdiction Reply with quote

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Posted by Codyman (Shadowlink8890@aol.com)
4 October 2009, 1:00 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Codyman1004091300311.html
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2012 12:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I hate to 'bump' this thread but I've been regularly checking here for comments since I posted this story and I was just hoping to see a little feedback if that is at all possible. Thank you and sorry.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2012 3:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The story has a campy humor to it. I liked it for that. Entertaining read.

Grammar was good, I think there was a missing "the" in one of the first sentences, but it is good to see no real glaring typos or spelling mistakes.
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