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Daddy Knows Best
Posted by Chuckles
29 July 2004, 11:28 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=chuckles.0729042328491.html

Chuckles · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 12:50 pm Post subject:

I got the title a bit wrong.

Daddy Knows Best is part 1 of the Mission From SATU series.

Oh well, I'll get the second one right.

C.T. Clown

Sentinel · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 1:24 pm Post subject:

That was good. Dad was Ackerson? The pieces are coming together, at least to me. Looking forward to part 2.

SYSTEM · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 3:32 pm Post subject:

I'm going to say the classic science-fiction movie line.

HoZ · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 7:12 pm Post subject:

NO!!!!!!!! Crying or Very sad

u cant kill the MC NOOOOOOOOO!
no really good story looking foward to the next
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Chuckles · Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 9:56 pm Post subject:

Thanks guys. Should be a lot of twists and turns in this one. Hope you enjoy it.

C.T. Clown

White elite · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 26 Location: CA.SD

holy **** there going to kill MC Shocked

Nick Kang · Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 1:49 pm Post subject:

Suh-weet

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White elite · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 26 Location: CA.SD

no fair i want to kill MC Evil or Very Mad

Chuckles · Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 4:29 pm Post subject:

Sorry but it will take more than a single elite Wink

Now, a team of twelve Spartans . . . maybe.

C.T. Clown

White elite · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 26 Location: CA.SD

dammit

White elite · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 26 Location: CA.SD

mabe if i had camo and a few more elite

Helljumper · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 298 Location: Pittsburgh

Good job, should use indents though, makes the formating look better. Damn you could have given me a shout out somewhere in there.

After all I've done for you, this is how you treat me. I wanta divorce.... no really my lawyer is on the way... could a brother get a shout out a thank you in the fic itself... I'll be looking out for it in the next chapter

I'm so glad this comments thing is worked out... I was getting worried there a minute... No its time for me to finnish up my series

ODST

Shaolin Fist · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 27

wow. this should be good. ::pulls up chair and some popcorn::

i am confused about one thing though...how old are Lexicus 'n Co.?

Mastergrunt · Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2004 3:16 am Post subject:

I like it, I like it, I like it. Can't wait too see the MC get killed!! Twisted Evil