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Chapter 1 (Intro)

 
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:55 pm    Post subject: Chapter 1 (Intro) Reply with quote

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Chapter 1 (Intro)
Posted by Ken Koelling (kenkoelling@hotmail.com)
9 September 2009, 3:44 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Ken_Koelling0909090344391.html
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 3:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Is this your first FanFic? I found the story rather boring to be honest, also the conversations seem immature or odd in nature sometimes. There were a few times that it appeared the story would pick up but it quickly reverts back to slow, vague, and not captivating. However your humor both subtle and intentional is good, I did chuckle at the meet between both the Grand Marshal, Scientist, and the monitor.
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