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PostPosted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:20 pm    Post subject: We March! Reply with quote

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We March!
Posted by UNSC Trooper (unsctrooper@hotmail.com)
22 August 2009, 4:30 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=UNSC_Trooper0822091630131.html
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 1:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've always had a bit of a hard time with rhymed poems without meter. Do both or go free! Razz.

But that's just my personal preference. In any case, it's nice to see a poem, feels like it's been a long time. Not really much to comment on here but I liked it alright aside from the lack of meter.

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Oral recording of stranded farmers in 2535, gathered by Walter R. Rowland.


Is this a reference to some other work of yours or is the poem a prolouge perhaps?
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 1:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not bad. There's a heightened risk of silliness in video game based poetry, but you avoid it quite well. Like 14th wonder, I prefer meter with my rhyme, but I still enjoyed this.

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