HBO Fan Fiction

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We March!
Posted by UNSC Trooper (unsctrooper@hotmail.com)
22 August 2009, 4:30 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=UNSC_Trooper0822091630131.html

The 14th Wonder · Member Joined: 31 May 2008 Posts: 35 Location: wat

I've always had a bit of a hard time with rhymed poems without meter. Do both or go free! Razz

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But that's just my personal preference. In any case, it's nice to see a poem, feels like it's been a long time. Not really much to comment on here but I liked it alright aside from the lack of meter.

Chuckles · Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 1:36 am Post subject:

Not bad. There's a heightened risk of silliness in video game based poetry, but you avoid it quite well. Like 14th wonder, I prefer meter with my rhyme, but I still enjoyed this.

C.T. Clown