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Halo: Seed of Orion (Part Two)
Posted by Wolverfrog (Wolverfrog49@Hotmail.com)
11 August 2009, 8:41 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Wolverfrog0811092041201.html

kabu · Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 7:22 am Post subject:

Gah. Please please please stick to one series a week?

Anyway, I like this one - not as much as True Sangheili, but I still like it. I'm really way too tired to write a third review tonight, so I'll just say that I think you have a really great plot set up here, but I would have liked to see a bit more from Hendel's point of view. What made the prologue great was the character development, which was largely missing here.

I still like it, though. So yeah, I'm going to sleep now.
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