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Vestal Sins: Chapter 4: Cedar Gables

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:42 pm    Post subject: Vestal Sins: Chapter 4: Cedar Gables Reply with quote

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Vestal Sins: Chapter 4: Cedar Gables
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24 July 2009, 4:03 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Arthur_Welle0724090403081.html
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well... there's not much I can say other than fucking brilliant.

Truthfully, I think this is one of the best items of fan fiction that I've ever come across throughout my extensive treks across the Internet.

*verbally takes his hat off*
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You know I don't usually comment, but when I do, when I feel compelled.

Eb said it best, I find this is the one of the best pieces of fiction I've ever read. It is one of the few that I look forward to each week, hoping a new chapter will be posted up. I don't know this because of the detective story, or the uniqueness of the plot and characters, but it's something.

I must say, you put much work into this, and I hope you continue.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 3:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks a lot to both of you. I'm genuinely pleased you liked it Smile

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 3:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Excellent work, Arthur. There's really not too much else to say. You write a compelling story. Grantmyre is again an unlikeable dick and fun as far as antagonists go. Props for Mantega and Ellie, that kind of little detail adds to the fact that this is the future and things are different. I'm thoroughly interested in Eyal's reasons for staying out of the war, though, and am looking forward to him finally spilling the beans.

Keep it up! Very Happy
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