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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 2:50 pm    Post subject: Our Last hope (can be set to Led Zeppelin's Achille's Last S Reply with quote

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Our Last hope (can be set to Led Zeppelin's Achille's Last Stand)
Posted by John Gurule, Jr. (d3jsgurule@yahoo.com)
8 December 2004, 5:54 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=john_gurule,.1208040554111.html
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 3:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This was an interesting poem, it kinda rhymed but sometimes was uneven. Other than that it was ok. I would give it a 6.2/10.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 5:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It wasn't a poem! It was a song!
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2004 1:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't know the song, but your new lyrics looked good.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2004 2:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Next time, mention what song it is to in an AN or something. That will make sure your title will not get cut off.

I don't no that song either, but it still sounded pretty good.
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