HBO Fan Fiction

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Our Last hope (can be set to Led Zeppelin's Achille's Last Stand)
Posted by John Gurule, Jr. (d3jsgurule@yahoo.com)
8 December 2004, 5:54 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=john_gurule,.1208040554111.html

Gruntlover2000 · Member Joined: 18 Nov 2004 Posts: 6

This was an interesting poem, it kinda rhymed but sometimes was uneven. Other than that it was ok. I would give it a 6.2/10.

(ENS) Rabid_Gallagher · Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 5:42 pm Post subject:

It wasn't a poem! It was a song!
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Chuckles · Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2004 1:33 am Post subject:

I don't know the song, but your new lyrics looked good.

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MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

Next time, mention what song it is to in an AN or something. That will make sure your title will not get cut off.

I don't no that song either, but it still sounded pretty good.
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