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Ode Tae Bungie
Posted by Jillybean
3 December 2004, 12:28 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=jillybean.1203041228141.html

Jenkins · Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 3:03 pm Post subject:

Since I'm pretty biased against poems, I have to say that your poems kinda creeped me out. Since poems are supposed to be unique and all that stuff I can't really provide you with ways to improve. The only thing I can say is convert to writing stories so that I can actually think of something to comment on. Oh yea, don't do that wierd dialect thing. It burned my corneas.

...damn I'm smart!

Stuntmutt · Member Joined: 03 Dec 2004 Posts: 14

Oh bonnie Jilly
Ye may be wee
But yer pome's a stoater
An' that'll dae me.

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

Yo, Jenkins. She does write regular stories. Check 'em out.

As for the poem; it was interesting. Kinda reminded me of rap. And I hate rap. But, it didn't stand out as bad, so, I deem this good.
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SYSTEM · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 2:36 am Post subject:

The Almighty Stuntmutt? Hey there. Do you remember that comic strip I sentcha' about the leather pants?

I'll get my recorder out and try playing this. It doesn't sound so good on a guitar.

- Dave.

Nick Kang · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 3:11 pm Post subject:

Ah yes, Dave...the master of leather stuff.

And I have no idea what that poem just said. I don't know...maybe I'm just dumb...
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Master Grunt · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 5:35 pm Post subject: Huh?

Could anyone translate that into modern English?

Berconius · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 6:46 pm Post subject:

Being in the midst of reading Huckleberry Fin for English class, the idea of reading more dialect makes me twitch. But this is still kinda...special...? In any case, I think that the representation of dialect here is at least pretty good. I didn't find it that hard to follow, though the dialect almost made me laugh.

In concurrence with MCC, I have to say that Jenkins has to get around this site more before making a call like that. Jillybean rocks like...something that rocks alot.

Slainte!

MasterSushi · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 7:41 pm Post subject:

I'm compiling my favourite quotes from the reviews starting from now. This is because I can't fit them on my signiture:

Master Grunt · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 7:51 pm Post subject: Quotes

That is a good idea. I'll PM you if I find any good candidates... Cool

Berconius · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 8:36 pm Post subject:

I'm guessing that my sig is too geeky for that then...?

Master Grunt · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 9:11 pm Post subject: Uh...

Uh... I'm guessing that too. I don't really understand it. What does it mean? Confused

Nick Kang · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 10:09 pm Post subject:

Oh yeah, I'm up there.
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Eighty percent of human wisdom is the desire to not butt into other peoples' business, and the other twenty percent doesn't matter.

Master Grunt · Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 10:16 pm Post subject:

Lol.

On second thought, you should put your funny quotes on the list as well, because people look at your list to get a good laugh, they shouldn't have to miss out on the funny stuff you said.

Oh and do funny quotes from the stories count? Like in "Master Chief is da bomb!!!", the author says that his story is as good as any other story in this database in the post scripts. I think that should be a funny quote! Very Happy

(ENS) Rabid_Gallagher · Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 12:41 am Post subject:

When I saw the text on this, I had this expression:

Shocked

Can anyone in here writeth in oldeth englishth!? Dammiteth!

Seriously, it was okay. It's the damn English writing tool you used. It'sth liketh writingth liketh thisth.

It's just damn confusing. . .