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PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 2:39 pm    Post subject: Ode Tae Bungie Reply with quote

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Ode Tae Bungie
Posted by Jillybean
3 December 2004, 12:28 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=jillybean.1203041228141.html
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 3:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Since I'm pretty biased against poems, I have to say that your poems kinda creeped me out. Since poems are supposed to be unique and all that stuff I can't really provide you with ways to improve. The only thing I can say is convert to writing stories so that I can actually think of something to comment on. Oh yea, don't do that wierd dialect thing. It burned my corneas.

...damn I'm smart!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 3:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh bonnie Jilly
Ye may be wee
But yer pome's a stoater
An' that'll dae me.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 1:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yo, Jenkins. She does write regular stories. Check 'em out.

As for the poem; it was interesting. Kinda reminded me of rap. And I hate rap. But, it didn't stand out as bad, so, I deem this good.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 2:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The Almighty Stuntmutt? Hey there. Do you remember that comic strip I sentcha' about the leather pants?

I'll get my recorder out and try playing this. It doesn't sound so good on a guitar.

- Dave.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 3:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah yes, Dave...the master of leather stuff.

And I have no idea what that poem just said. I don't know...maybe I'm just dumb...
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 5:35 pm    Post subject: Huh? Reply with quote

Could anyone translate that into modern English?
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 6:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Being in the midst of reading Huckleberry Fin for English class, the idea of reading more dialect makes me twitch. But this is still kinda...special...? In any case, I think that the representation of dialect here is at least pretty good. I didn't find it that hard to follow, though the dialect almost made me laugh.

In concurrence with MCC, I have to say that Jenkins has to get around this site more before making a call like that. Jillybean rocks like...something that rocks alot.

Slainte!
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 7:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm compiling my favourite quotes from the reviews starting from now. This is because I can't fit them on my signiture:

Quote:
"Do not call me your "homie" again or I will strangle you." -A Halo Fan...natic

"The Code is what separates us from the animals. It's not opposable thumbs like all them rookie scientists say" -Nick Kang


These are the only two so far minus my own at the bottom of my sig. (Nick's is on my sig too, I didn't include mine in the compilation because I thought it would look big-headed Smile )

I'm going to go back and find some from the last few threads.

To qualify for a place on the Sushi's "Best Quotes Thingy" the quote must make me laugh...

That's it really...

I'll randomly post the list on random posts.

Thank you! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 7:51 pm    Post subject: Quotes Reply with quote

That is a good idea. I'll PM you if I find any good candidates... Cool
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 8:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm guessing that my sig is too geeky for that then...?
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 9:11 pm    Post subject: Uh... Reply with quote

Uh... I'm guessing that too. I don't really understand it. What does it mean? Confused
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 10:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh yeah, I'm up there.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 10:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lol.

On second thought, you should put your funny quotes on the list as well, because people look at your list to get a good laugh, they shouldn't have to miss out on the funny stuff you said.

Oh and do funny quotes from the stories count? Like in "Master Chief is da bomb!!!", the author says that his story is as good as any other story in this database in the post scripts. I think that should be a funny quote! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 12:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

When I saw the text on this, I had this expression:


Shocked Shocked Shocked

Can anyone in here writeth in oldeth englishth!? Dammiteth!


Seriously, it was okay. It's the damn English writing tool you used. It'sth liketh writingth liketh thisth.

It's just damn confusing. . .
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