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A Series Of Poems: The Code of the Spartans

 
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 2:38 pm    Post subject: A Series Of Poems: The Code of the Spartans Reply with quote

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A Series Of Poems: The Code of the Spartans
Posted by (ENS) Rabid_Gallagher (rabid_masterchief@hotmail.com)
3 December 2004, 12:52 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=ens_rabid_ga.1203040052132.html
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 6:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry about the shortness of this one. I didn't have much time to write it with the time between jobs and picking up kids. But, the next one will be longer and, probably better too.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 7:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, somebody else on here has kids?! Keeps you young.

Not bad, but a bit shallow. I liked the part about fighting with death, not against him, but the rest of it seemed like too much bravado. Maybe it wouldn't seem so corny if it wasn't a video game.

Man, there sure has been a lot of poetry lately. I used to say "kudos for having the guts to post poetry about Halo" on each poetry thread. I don't think I need to do that anymore--soon the poems will outnumber the stories.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 11:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

PIWIF? The Code of the Spartan is PIWIF? Eh, who cares.

I thought it was pretty cool. Like Chuckles said, the whole 'Fight Against Death' thing seemed pretty cool.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 11:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty good. Wasn't as long as I like 'em; seemed a tad clipped. But, it was pretty good. Just needs a tad more material.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 7:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks guys. Like I said, I didn't have much time to expand n it, but I will make another one. And Chuckles, I didn't know you had kids.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 7:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Come on! Write back!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 7:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Please? Come on, I'll give you some cookies....please?
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 7:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Please? Come on, I'll give you some cookies....please?
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 7:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I want cookies! Come on, just one?

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