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Amethyst part 6 - Cross Purposes

 
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 1:56 pm    Post subject: Amethyst part 6 - Cross Purposes Reply with quote

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Amethyst part 6 - Cross Purposes
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14 November 2008, 2:39 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=kr1426161114080239101.html
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 8:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good addition.

I'm particuarly fond of how you write the Echoes and Jeff's feelings toward them. I'm pretty sure I've written that praise before, but it bears repeating.

You paint an excellent picture of the Elites in conversation. Shrinking the hologram was a nice touch.

I really wanted this to be longer. Get on part 7, darn it.

Keep up the good work.
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 3:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty nice, kr. I'm definitely going to have to take a leaf from your book when it comes to writing Elites.
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