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Shadow of Fear: City in Flames

 
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 1:05 pm    Post subject: Shadow of Fear: City in Flames Reply with quote
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Shadow of Fear: City in Flames
Posted by Archangel_7 (x_archangel7_x@yahoo.com)
31 October 2008, 8:49 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Archangel_71031080849351.html
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 02, 2008 2:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Very good story. Your main character is very believable and it's easy to get into his head and empathize with him.

Nothing much wrong with the GPS and all, a few small things here and there but I'm not gonna nitpick too much.
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