HBO Fan Fiction

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The Priestess and the Warrior - Spark in the Casket
Posted by Jillybean (jillybean@bungie.org)
19 September 2008, 9:47 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Jillybean0919080947101.html

thedarkfire · Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 12:07 am Post subject:

Very good Jilly. While I know that you don't normally interweave combat, namely in-game combat, in your story I feel like in this case it turned out quite well. It's nice to see that your updating this story on a slightly more regular pace now. This was one I was really into back in the day and it's good to see the story continue. Now if you would post on the forums every once in a while...

Jillybean · Darth Diva Joined: 17 Dec 2004 Posts: 299

I hate in-game combat in fic so it's not my favourite thing to write. I'm trying though - especially since the next chapter is 'The Covenant' - I don't think there can be a more important chapter in this story . . . and it's all described in game. Argh.

mr bill · is a step away from a ban. Joined: 01 Aug 2004 Posts: 0

Cliche and more cliche. Jilly you are better then this.