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The Priestess and the Warrior - Spark in the Casket

 
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 2:01 pm    Post subject: The Priestess and the Warrior - Spark in the Casket Reply with quote

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The Priestess and the Warrior - Spark in the Casket
Posted by Jillybean (jillybean@bungie.org)
19 September 2008, 9:47 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Jillybean0919080947101.html
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 12:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very good Jilly. While I know that you don't normally interweave combat, namely in-game combat, in your story I feel like in this case it turned out quite well. It's nice to see that your updating this story on a slightly more regular pace now. This was one I was really into back in the day and it's good to see the story continue. Now if you would post on the forums every once in a while...
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 9:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I hate in-game combat in fic so it's not my favourite thing to write. I'm trying though - especially since the next chapter is 'The Covenant' - I don't think there can be a more important chapter in this story . . . and it's all described in game. Argh.
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 11:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cliche and more cliche. Jilly you are better then this.
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