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The Marine, the Rebel and the Sangheili: Prologue

 
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 2:01 pm    Post subject: The Marine, the Rebel and the Sangheili: Prologue Reply with quote
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The Marine, the Rebel and the Sangheili: Prologue
Posted by QuantumSheep (jasnash@optusnet.com.au)
17 September 2008, 7:43 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=QuantumSheep0917080743341.html
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 12:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Very well written, at least in my opinion, i liked how you took the reader into the minds of you characters. However i do question the additude of you elite characters. They seemed relaxed, almost inaccuratly so, but otherwise i thought it was very good.
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