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Survival Instincts, Chapter 3
Posted by GLADIATRRR3000 (gladitarrr3000@hotmail.com)
29 November 2004, 4:23 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=gladiatrrr30.1129040423324.html

(ENS) Rabid_Gallagher · Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 4:51 am Post subject:

Very nice
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Mark Lieberg · Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 9:47 am Post subject: ...

Interesing story. Those people however are stupid and gay. LOL

Well nice story. Keep on writing.
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MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

This one went by even faster than the first. Same general stuff to work on that I said in your other. Also, try getting into the personalities of people more. Add a higher level of emotion in there so we can get into things further.
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SYSTEM · Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 2:23 am Post subject:

Survival Instincts should be up on the "Fridge Door of Fame" award list on HFS. Still, a little slippage, but don't let me bother you.

Keep on rockin'! Uh, writing.

- Dave.

Mark Lieberg · Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 6:23 am Post subject: ....

What is the Door of Fridge or whatever Dave? Hey did anyone see my posting? Please Put comments. Please here is the link to post and read my story...

http://hboff.bungie.org//viewtopic.php?t=533

that is Chapter 4

and here is Chapter 3

http://hboff.bungie.org//viewtopic.php?t=528

thanks and please i really like comments. And Dave. Tell me what that Fridgy thing means. Thanks
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SYSTEM · Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 12:24 am Post subject:

The Fridge Door of Fame awards are the awards list - I sent you the link to it - the best ficks get nominated there.

And everyone is eligible - but me.

- Dave.