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hboff Site Admin
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Mark25 BANNED
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 4:07 pm Post subject: |
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Fantastic, theatrical, compelling and nicely measured. I think your only competition this week is a wonderful little dialogue piece by Useful Dave.
Great job Kr.
An excellent single theme subject that sheds light on why being afraid of the dark can be a perfectly rational fear. Watch out for the...
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Jake Trommer Member

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Pretty impressive, kr. Are you going to be doing anything more with this? _________________ Sir Isaac Newton is the DEADLIEST SON OF A BITCH IN SPACE!
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kr1 IRC Channel Operator

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Sadly, I don't know of any way that I can. It took me months to try to figure out a way to get it to 750 words so I could submit it. The beginning part was written much later than the rest and actually intended as a piece about the Flood. With a few word changes they fit pretty well together, though. I liked writing this, though, so hopefully I can come up with something similar. _________________
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The 14th Wonder Member

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Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:24 pm Post subject: |
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| Chilling. I always like seeing a short piece done well. |
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